03 August 2015

A Challenge of 7ish Proportions

Josh
Because...Robin Hood. From Pinterest. Well, actually from Locksley, but you know.
So I was tagged by the beautiful Cally Declan AND the lovely Becca to do the 777 challenge. Basically I open up my book (or one of them I suppose) and then I go to the seventh page and then I pick seven lines to give to the world. O.o Because I'm awesome, I'm going to go one step further and make the first line that I'm sharing the seventh line down. Ooooooooh so I'm totally going crazy with this because I'm AWESOME. And so daring! Living on the edge here.

Okay.

On to the snippet.

Zis is from the book I'm working on that I started during Camp NaNo. It is a crazy one because it's Steampunk and that's the first time I've ever dabbled in such a genre.

Without further ado...


Mr. Deeds paused again as the recording stopped, then repeated his inquiry after her name. Amber responded with the positive this time, so Mr. Deeds said, “I am very pleased to meet you, Amber.” Her name was just the recording playing back, which made Amber laugh.
          “You’re a polite little tin can, huh?” she said with a chuckle that turned into a cough. When she stopped coughing, she noticed that the light was fading. She looked at her watch, with a flutter of anxiety, though she didn’t quite know why since she didn’t actually have a home to get to before curfew. It said that it was a quarter past three, but Amber had no idea how much it had lagged since that morning.

VOILA.

I'm supposed to tag 7 people so here goes... ABBIE at Cyan Typewriter because I would do something drastic to hear any part of her writing, TRESKIE (muahahahahhaha yes you totally have to do it yes yes), JACK because she's epic in general, MARY SHELLEY REID because I'm just getting to know her through her blog and what better way to go about that than to read her writing, LORRAINE because everyone needs more Lorraine, DALLY  because she seriously needs to post some posts, and LAUREN because her writing always moves me.

I'M OUT.

18 comments :

  1. Aw, thanks for tagging me :) I love your blog and getting to know you!
    xoxo
    ms

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    1. You're so welcome! Thanks for your lovely comment! :-)

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  2. FIRST OF ALL HOW DARE YOU. I DON'T POST MY WRITING. IS BAD AND EMBARRASSING. HANNAAAAAAAAH

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    1. THAT'S EXACTLY WHY I DARE BECAUSE I WANT TO READ IT AND I'M SURE IT'S NOT THAT BAD SERIOUSLY MY SNIPPET WAS LIKE BARFABLE.

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    2. Does the Lucy from Charlie Brown "I oughta slug you..." *le smirk.*

      FINE I WILL POST IT HERE, BUT I WON'T DO IT ON MY BLOG, THAT'S A LOT OF PEOPLE READING MY NONSENSE.

      I feel very uncomfortable with this, just so you know.



      "She missed him terribly sometimes. The ache had gone somewhat, but she still felt like crap when she thought of him. Crap and empty. She was tired of being empty. Rose bit the inside of her mouth and looked out the window. The aspens were completely yellow now. A few of them seemed a little bare, like half their leaves had deserted them and the ones left behind had to double their efforts to make the tree look dressed.
      That’s how I feel. She thought. I feel like a tree with half it’s leaves missing: unfinished and cold. "

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    3. WELL AT LEAST YOU POSTED IT SOMEWHERE. I am glad though I don't think it's that bad and you could have posted it on your blog. Still, at least you posted it here. Now I just have to hack your blogger account and.... er.... nothing.... ;-)

      You should write more. And let me read it.

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    4. SO NOT COMFORTABLE WITH IT. LOL. Well you are my friend, so you are biased. lol. ....

      Eeeeh. Maybe. Possibly. It's dark and weird. and it's cheesy.

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  3. YAY STEAMPUNK IS AMAZING.

    xoxo Morning

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    1. HEE. It's also slightly terrifying when you don't know what you're doing. o.O

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  4. Thanks for tagging me :)
    By the way...I love your piece of writing <3

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    1. Thanks for being awesome! :-)
      And thank you for the kind words! It's kind of the worst part. XD

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  5. Ahhhh, this is such a fabulous idea for a tag!! Brilliant, really.. and OHMYGOODNESS, I WANT MORE OF YOUR BOOK NOW. This is actually really taunting I think, hmm.. Steampunk sounds like fun to write, though I've never tried it. I'm sure your story is marvelous, girl! and SUIFHSAJKNDA thank you so much for tagging me!! gahh, you're too sweet oh my goshies. <3 I'll totally do this tag, because it looks like really great fun. :D

    love,
    abbie

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    1. I know right? How fun! Haha I can't believe you actually are intrigued by that snippet! I found it quite dull, really. Steampunk IS fun to write... I'm loving the little quirks it presents. Like the ability to have robots and such. XD It's pretty cool. I can't wait for you to do the tag! Heeee!

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  6. TIN CAN AHAHAHAHA
    *the crowd chants* POST MORE POST MORE POST MOREPOSTMOREPOSTMORE *dull roar*

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    1. XD Glad you liked it. Haha. Maybe I will, maybe I won't. *disappears into the mist*

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  7. your commenters are funny. *snicker snicker*

    Also I agree, I hate my snippet. XDDD I think like the first....I was going to say 20 pages, but really all of the pages of the first draft are pretty stinking awful of books. *dies* XDD ESPECIALLY BEGINNINGS. They should have chosen like the first seven sentences of a part you like in your book. *barfs* no good in my book. XD

    (this will probably count for nothing, but that was a beautiful snippet. I LOVE YOUR BOOK. send me it so i can read it. i could send you my book but i don't know if you'd find the time to read it XD)

    lovies. come back right now because i miss you.

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    1. XD Yes, yes they are.

      I think all of the first like all of the pages are pretty lame in my book. XD ARGHHHH. Okay okay not going to stress about writing. *tries really hard*

      But yeah. Beginnings are always the lamest.

      AND IT COUNTS FOR LOTS THANK YOU YOU ARE AMAZING I WILL SEND YOU MY BOOK AS SOON AS I DECIDE WHAT I WANT TO DELETE FROM IT. XD And send me yours because I now have way more time. I'm home. :-)

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